You do not have to bring about any sort of the change in the structure of the paragraph sufficiently. It would be such an easy way out if you will be jotting down with the notes and explain out with some of the main points into the paragraph. You should be hence rewriting all by means of using the notes and not the original one. Proofreading the document as about 2-3 times definitely. 

Anyone can do this, all you need is a computer and the ability to string a sentence together. You can write original articles and submit them to article directories and get paid. You have to apply to these sites and may or may not get turned down. If you should happen to get turned down then just keep plugging away until you find someone to "hire" you.
He saw a trainer nearby and inquired why these animals made no effort to get away and just stood there. “Well,” trainer said, “when they are quite young and much smaller we use exactly the same size rope to tie them and, at that age, it’s enough to hold them. They are conditioned to believe they cannot break away, as they grow up. They believe the rope can still hold them, so they never try to break free.”
A long time ago right now there lived a boy. He had blue eyes with blond hair as yellowish as gold. The young boy was small and fragile, but his mind was swift just like the wind. He could calculate the outcome of any situation in the blink of an eye. But that had not been his biggest talent. No. His biggest skill was perception. The young boy could understand and perceive anything quicker than anyone he previously ever met. Then, he fell in love with a beautiful princess. She acquired magnetic green eye and light brown locks. He loved her quite definitely and she loved him back more even. There was only 1 problem – the young boy was the son of a blacksmith. The princess’s father could not allow her to marry a straightforward child of a blacksmith. But their love was too strong. In one fell swoop, the young boy raised an army of undead and began a rebellion to overthrow the evil king who did not believe in true love. After months of fighting against the armies of his beloved’s father, the youthful boy was assassinated and the battle was over. No songs were sang.
He saw a trainer nearby and asked why these animals just stood there and made no attempt to get away. “Well,” trainer said, “when they are very young and much smaller we use the same size rope to tie them and, at that age, it’s enough to hold them. As they grow up, they are conditioned to believe they cannot break away. They believe the rope can still hold them, so they never try to break free.”
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